From: Deborah C Howell [mailto:HowellDC@washpost.com]
On Behalf Of Ombudsman Internet DropBox
Sent: Sunday, May 28, 2006 2:05 PM
To: Dr. Michael Berenhaus
Cc: Scott Wilson
Subject: Re: I was asked to raise this point with you from a Washington Post reporter
Dr. Berenhaus, I've gotten a number of complaints about that picture caption and am following up on that. I haven't gotten complaints about the headline and will go back and look at it. Deborah
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Subject: I was asked to raise this point with you from a Washington Post reporter
05/28/2006 01:17PM
Scott Wilson, Jerusalem reporter, offered that I should run this by you:
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From: Scott Wilson
Sent: Sunday, May 28, 2006 9:04 AM
To: Dr. Michael Berenhaus
Subject: Re: recent news
Michael:
You raise some interesting points that, as someone who doesn't see the physical paper everyday, I was unaware of. I appreciate your very careful reading of the work from here, and a fair sense of balance. If I were you, I would send the note you sent me to Deborah Howell, our ombudsman, who takes these things very seriously. You'll get a response, I'm sure.
Take care
Scott
From: Dr. Michael Berenhaus
Sent: Friday, May 26, 2006 8:07 PM
To: Scott Wilson
Subject: recent news
Scott,
I enjoyed your article in yesterday’s paper (May 25). Titles, as in yesterday’s “Israeli Troops Kill 4 Palestinians,” I am aware are not written by you but by the editors. By reading the title, I would have never guessed that the Palestinians died “after” they attacked the Israeli troops with “gunfire and a hail of stones” as reported in your article. I would have been led to believe the opposite, that the Israelis were the attackers. So what seems to have occurred in the title is a reversal in who was responsible for the attack. Even if it is said that the Israeli troop’s mission was provocative, ‘Four Palestinians Die in Clashes with Israelis’ would not have seemed to distort who the aggressor was. Another point was that the Israelis were called “Troops” and the Palestinians were not even called “militants” – making it seem as if Israel opened fire on 4 Palestinians walking down the street minding their own business. On the front page, they just called them “people.”
Speaking of the front page, the caption below the front page picture of Israeli Prime Minister Ohlmert seemed to show sarcasm or cynicism toward the Israelis: “On a day in which Israeli soldiers killed four people in Ramallah, he [Ohlmert] urged Palestinians to accept peace-talk terms. Stories, A21.” I am not sure what to say to you regarding the apparent undercurrent of The Washington Post’s editor’s in just one day’s coverage. There were no lies in what was written but words were used to tell what seemed to be a different story than what happened. I have written to the Post about this before and have gotten very few responses. I have gotten very few responses. Do you have any suggestions on how I can proceed on this?
Michael